Character Setting

It is gloomy and the weather is kind of freezing. It is winter and the leaves are falling off the trees. The smell of the leaves flying around make me want to put them into my mouth. Cars are honking and I can't even close my eyes. Babies are crying and the mothers are telling stories. If I was a bad person, I'd called the police and report them immediately. The sound of the wind terrifies me. The roomy is not yet here. Papers, pens, and pencils are scattered around. Can't find a good place to lay down.
Being exhausted from school, I had to clean the messy room first. A dog came in front of the door and bark at it. I did not know what was he barking at. I was too busy cleaning the room. As soon as I got to the door, I heard something being smashed down. I didn't see anything but the dog. He was barking like there was something wrong in the house. Other than that, I saw a big rock under the trees. I thought maybe the rock was the reason the dog was barking. I slammed it closed and went in. Trying to look for the broom, the light broke down. Everywhere in the house was all dark. Had to look for a flash light but could not find any. As soon as I opened the door, leaving blew into the house. It was a madness. I led the door opened and start cleaning the kitchen and the living room. What a bad day.


In class, we had a homework regarding character setting. We were to choose a character setting from one of our peers in the community classroom and do one that's similar to theirs but different setting. 
This is a setting which I took from one of my friend Thierry Nguyen. Here is the linked to it: https://plus.google.com/u/0/103216080058595427694/posts/dEuX616E4sx?cfem=1