Friday, November 7, 2014

Bad Day

The weather is a battle
Planned to go for a run
Decided to take a break
Visited the Hair Comb
It was very good impact
Everything was free

Even if everything was free
it was a battle
the impact
made me run
for the comb
it was really a battle

I took a break
To free
my mind from the comb
The battle
was still in process so I run
another impact

The impact
led me to another break
But again, I run
to free
the battle
of the comb

The comb
caused me great impact
Had to battle
to break
and have free
on the run


From all the run
the comb
broke free
the impact
took a break
from the battle

2 comments:

  1. Hahaha, Pam, yours is hilarious! Yes, as someone who doesn't want to pick a fight with the comb (hairbrush), this is what's expected of me. I'd run away from all this! Pam, on one condition: I thought this needed to end with six stanzas and a final triplet. You can edit it, and predictions has it that it will be more super hilarious. Great effort!

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  2. You add the final triplet. I am out of words. Suggestions? Thank you though.

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